Title: Unlawful Desire
Series: ALFA PI Book #2
No matter how hard I tried to push her away, fate thrust us together again.
Screw relationships. My motto: Hit it and quit it.
Simple worked. Feelings weren’t on the line, hearts weren’t able to be broken,
and I could keep my life simple.
My friends told me to move on and find the “one,” but I wasn’t ready to love again.
Until I met her.
A dirty-mouthed temptress with a killer body that had me questioning everything.
I knew I could ruin her forever, but not without losing myself.
I wouldn’t do it.
But Georgia Phillips was innocent, pure, and total perfection.
I wouldn’t be the one to strip her bare and break her heart.
I swore I’d never call another woman mine, but that was before I almost lost her.
Warning: If you can’t handle a cocky bad boy or a badass chick with a dirty mouth,
this might not be the book for you.
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Review
Panty Scorching- 4
Storyline-3
Angst- 2
Tissues-0
Value-4
Overall Rating- 4
Received an ARC for review
What more could a girl want? A hot alpha male PI and a girl who was a “virgin”.
I had troubles with the story line in this one. Yes, I know it is a “fiction” romance, but I just wish it went a little slower.
You have Frisco, who is an ex-Navy Seal who now works for the ALFA PI and sounds hotter than heck. His ex-fiancé cheats on him and it starts off with him sleeping with her and then dumping her like a hot potato.
He then attends a friend’s kid’s birthday party and meets Georgia. She is a sassy, sexy school librarian. He immediately has feeling for her and tries to push her away when he finds out how old she is, and he doesn’t want a relationship.
Frisco has one drunken night with Georgia, and it was one heck of a night, considering she is a virgin. But once Frisco learns that, he is even surer that he wants nothing to do with her. He thinks she needs a “good guy” and he is far from that.
Georgia of course feels differently. She was dumped by her fiancé also, and he was a “good guy” and she is ready for a “bad boy”. Well, Frisco is your kind of guy.
After they had their night together, he says he can’t see her anymore, and she is crying all the next day at work. (WTF? You just had a night with him, it isn’t like it was a relationship yet.)
Their friends Suzy and City throw the two of them together after Frisco has done everything to stay away, because they know they are perfect for each other. So he takes her out again, and the relationship starts. (Date 2 and they are in love)
Listen, it is a hot read, I just think the relationship was a bit rushed for me. But I gave it 4 stars because Chelle Bliss can write a great story. I don’t do spoilers, so I can’t tell you how it ends… but I told you how it starts, so just read all the hotness and see where it take them. And listen, Frisco has “ampallang piercing”, that right there should tell you that you need to read about him.
Unlawful Desire Excerpt
She leaned back against the bar with her tits jutting out and her arms crossed underneath. “What’s your problem with me? Did I do something to you, Frisco?”
Caught off guard by her question, my body jerked backward. “N-no,” I stuttered.
She tapped her foot. “You ditched me, marched off when you heard my age, and tonight, you seem less than happy that I’m here. What the fuck gives?”
I cleared my throat, trying to find my voice and a reasonable explanation. “I don’t have anything against you.” I was in so much trouble.
“Let’s cut the shit, Frisco. I’m a big girl. What’s the problem? Would you rather I leave?” Her body oozed attitude.
I cringed. I never wanted to hurt anyone, but I knew that I had hurt her feelings. “No. Don’t go. I’m sorry. It’s just that Sunshine…” My chest tightened. “She’s trying to fix us up.”
Georgia filled her cheeks with air before slowly exhaling. “Is that so bad?” She narrowed her eyes. “If I’m not your type, it’s cool. But otherwise, what’s the issue? I thought we had a nice time up until you left the party. I’m a big girl. Just be honest with me. I’m not into playing games.”
I wanted to play games. Naked games that ended with us against a wall, tangled together like we’d played the sexiest game of Twister.
SINFUL INTENT – ALFA PI BOOK 1
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Chelle Bliss, USA Today Bestselling author, currently lives in a small town near the Gulf of Mexico in Florida. She’s a full-time writer, time-waster extraordinaire, social media addict, and coffee fiend. She’s written over thirteen books and has three series available. She loves spending her free time with her boyfriend, 2 cats, and her hamster.
Before becoming a writer, Chelle taught high school history for over ten years. She holds a master’s degree in Instructional Technology and a bachelor’s in history. Although history is her first love, writing has become her dream job and she can’t imagine doing anything else.
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